Dangling Modifiers

Dangling Modifiers

 Dangling modifier 

- it is a phrase or clause which says something different from what is meant because words are left out. The meaning of the sentence, therefore, is left "dangling."

Modifiers are words, phrases, or clauses that add description. 

*In logical sentences, you will often find modifiers right to—either in front of or behind the target words they logically describe.

Example: 

Horrified, Mom snatched the deviled eggs from Jack, whose fingers were covered in cat hair.

Notice that horrified precedes Mom, its target, just as deviled sits right before eggs. Whose fingers were covered in cat hair follows Jack, its target. Sometimes, however, an inexperienced writer will include a modifier but forget the target.  The modifier thus dangles because the missing target word leaves nothing for the modifier to describe.

Dangling modifiers are errors. 

Their poor construction confuses readers. 

 Examples:

1. Hungry, the leftover pizza was devoured.

Hungry is a single-word adjective. Notice that there is no one in the sentence for this modifier to describe. 

2. Rummaging in her giant handbag, the sunglasses escaped detection.

Rummaging in her giant handbag is a participle phrase. In the current sentence, no word exists for this phrase to modify.   

3. Neither sunglasses nor detection has fingers to make rummaging possible!

With a sigh of disappointment, the expensive dress was returned to the rack.

With a sigh of disappointment is a string of prepositional phrases. If you look carefully, you do not find anyone in the sentence capable of feeling disappointed. Neither dress nor rack has emotions!

Fixing a dangling modifier:         
Fixing a dangling modifier will require more than rearranging the words in the sentence. You will often need to add something new so that the modifier finally has a target word to describe:

1.Hungry, we devoured the leftover pizza. 

2.Rummaging in her giant handbag, Frieda failed to find her sunglasses.

3. With a sigh of disappointment, Charlene returned the expensive dress to the rack.

Other example: 

Incorrect:
While driving on Greenwood Avenue yesterday afternoon, a tree began to fall toward Wendy H's car.

Correct:
While Wendy H was driving on Greenwood Avenue yesterday afternoon, a tree began to fall toward her car.

(Adding a word or two makes the sentence clear.

Restate it and add the words it needs in order to make sense.)